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Revised Logline Critique Round - #11
TITLE: Incandescent
GENRE: Romantic suspense

After crash landing a drug dealer’s plane, Jack stumbles into the world of Seely Davis, reclusive horse-whisperer. Jack seems to always be one step behind the dirty DEA agent that burned him and they’ll have to dodge bullets, avalanches and bombs as they fall in love - if only Seely’s past doesn’t cripple her future.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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I'm still unclear on whether Jack is a drug dealer or a good guy. Is he also a DEA agent and his cover got blown? A bit more clarity would help us place who the characters are and where they're coming from.

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