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Revised Logline Critique Round - #12
Kitty
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TITLE: CRACKED
GENRE: YA Urban Fantasy


Charmingly wicked half-demon Meda is forced to hide from hell’s army in a school for demon-hunters--who mistakenly believe she’s a saint. Now she must figure out why the demons are after her (or, more importantly, how to make them un-after her) before her hosts figure out her goal isn’t world peace--just not to get ripped to pieces.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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I like the world you're creating with this. I'd take out the parenthetical statement, but otherwise it's very good!

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