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Revised Logline Critique Round - #14
Kitty
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TITLE: Unitus
GENRE: YA

LOGLINE: Teenage girl seeks to escape her dystopian society through alien abduction, but the alien she summons turn out to be a fierce warrior who wants to kill her.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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Pop a name in for your MC. Too much distance with, 'teenage girl.' And what sort
of dystopian society are we talking about? :)

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