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Revised Logline Critique Round - #18
Kitty
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Title: Unwritten
Genre: Contemporary Fiction with Strong Romantic Elements

When pop superstar Katherine Hayes’ estranged mother launches a vicious smear campaign against her, the positive image she’s worked so hard for is tarnished. Now Kate must overcome the psychological effects of a childhood trauma to regain the respect of her fans and discovers success means nothing without the college professor who’s stolen her heart.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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I agreed with Stefanie. The two sentences almost didn't seem to be from the same story. I was confused as to what the main conflict and goals were. With the first sentence, I thought it would be about keeping her rep intact in the face of her mother's slander (taking place in the present), but the second seemed to be talking about a different conflict, one that happened in the MC's childhood. Great ideas though!

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