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Revised Logline Critique Round - #18
Kitty
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Title: Unwritten
Genre: Contemporary Fiction with Strong Romantic Elements

When pop superstar Katherine Hayes’ estranged mother launches a vicious smear campaign against her, the positive image she’s worked so hard for is tarnished. Now Kate must overcome the psychological effects of a childhood trauma to regain the respect of her fans and discovers success means nothing without the college professor who’s stolen her heart.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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I agree with the other commenters. I think the reader can figure out the mc's childhood wasn't so hot if her mother launches a vicious smear campaign.

Think about antecedents - "...image she's" refers to the mother. You might want the mc's name here. Then: "Now she must regain the respect of her fans or ....consequences.

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