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Revised Logline Critique Round - #18
Kitty
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Title: Unwritten
Genre: Contemporary Fiction with Strong Romantic Elements

When pop superstar Katherine Hayes’ estranged mother launches a vicious smear campaign against her, the positive image she’s worked so hard for is tarnished. Now Kate must overcome the psychological effects of a childhood trauma to regain the respect of her fans and discovers success means nothing without the college professor who’s stolen her heart.

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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I too love the first sentence. The rest needs to tie in more. I think if you explained more about the childhood trauma that might work. The college professor either needs to be included more in the first area-where we hear about her problems or it might be able to be cut.

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